By John Braheny
Here is a checklist that will maximize your chances of getting heard and respect the listeners time.
1. Never send more than three songs unless specifically requested otherwise. Demo listeners like watching the "in" pile diminish and the "out" pile grow as quickly as possible. If the listener has a limited time to listen, which is usually the case, the tendency is to listen to a tape/CD they know they can complete. So if you send a demo with ten songs on it and someone elses demo has one song, you can bet that the "out" pile will grow quickly with one-song demos. Theres also the psychology that implies, "Ive sent you the song you need!" This is particularly true in pitching songs to producers for a specific artist. Along those same lines, most people resent getting tapes//CDs with 20 songs and a letter that says, "I know youll like at least one of these, so just pick out what you want." They want you to do that and send them three songs or less. songs you totally believe in. If youre not far enough along to be able to decide, youre not ready. When sending CDs with more than three songs, highlight three you want the listener to focus on first, and include the numbers of the cuts in your cover letter and lyric sheets (so they have a reference while the CD is on their player and they cant see the label). If they like those, theyll listen to the others. And please, remove the shrink-wrap!
2. Place your best and most commercial song first. If you have a strong up-tempo song its a good bet to start with that. If they dont like the first one, it may be the only shot you get. If youre sending a cassette, put all the songs on the same side and put the label only on the "play" side.
3. Never send your original master tape or CD. You may never see it again and its not fair to saddle its recipient with responsibility for it.
4. Always cue your tape to the beginning of the first song. You dont want the person to start listening in a bad mood because you just wasted his time making him rewind your tape. When you make your copies, leave four seconds between songs. Most cassette decks have an automatic search feature, which finds the silence between songs, stops the fast-forward and automatically starts playing the next song. Obviously, this isnt a problem with CDs. If your CD contains more than the first four you want heard, clearly mark on the on the CD and printed insert, which ones you want them to hear.
5. Send a lyric sheet, neatly typed or printed. Letterhead is impressive. It says "This is my business and I take it seriously." Some dont like to look at lyrics while they listen, but most do. Its a time saver to be able to see it all at once and to see the structure of the song graphically laid out on the page. Lead sheets (with melody and lyric together) are not sent out with demos. Theyre good to have at the point where a producer wants to record your song and you want to be sure he/she has the correct melody, but since the current copyright law permits tapes/CDs to be sent for copyright registration, their importance has diminished. Lead sheets are bulky to mail, its too difficult to follow the lyric and visualize the songs form, and many industry pros dont read music anyway. It also pegs you as a songwriter over 50 who has no experience in submitting demos since this practice went out of style about 25 years ago.
When you type out your lyric sheet, separate the sections of the songs with a space and label each one (verse, chorus, bridge etc.) at the upper left side of the section. Do not type your lyrics in prose fashion. Lay them out with the rhymes at the ends of the lines so the structure and rhyme schemes of the song can be seen immediately.
6. Make sure theres a copyright notice (© 2003 I.B. Cool, All Rights Reserved) on the bottom of the lyric sheet and on the tape or CD label. Technically, this isnt necessary but it alerts everyone that your song is protected, whether its registered or not.
7. Cover letters should be short and to the point. Let the music speak for itself and avoid hype. A professional presentation will do more to impress someone than "I know these are hit songs because theyre better than anything Ive ever heard on the radio," or "I just know that we can both make a lot of money if youll publish these songs." Avoid the temptation to tell your life story, and dont explain how you have a terminal disease, youre the sole support of your 10 children and if these songs dont get recorded theyll all be homeless or worse. In fact, dont plead, apologize or show any hint of desperation. It only gives the message that you have no confidence in the ability of the songs to stand on their own.
Heres what should be in your cover letter:
a. It should be addressed to a specific person in the company.
b. It should state your purpose in sending the demo. Are you looking for a publisher, a producer, a record deal for you as an artist? Do you want the listener to pay special attention to your production, your singing, your band, or just the song? Is it targeted for a specific artist?
c. List any significant professional credits that apply to the purpose of your submission. If you want your song published, list other published or recorded songs, contests won, etc. If youre a performer submitting an artist demo, resist the temptation to grab at weak credits:" I played at the same club that (famous star) played. Tell them what drives you, what inspires you. Keep it short. List real sales figures. Dont lie.
d. Include any casting ideas you might have if youre pitching to other artists.
e. Ask for feedback if you want it. Odds are you wont get it but give it a shot.
f. List the songs enclosed and writers names in the order they appear on the tape/CD. (Lyric sheets should also be enclosed in the same order the songs appear on the demo.)
g. Thank them for their time and attention.
h. Include your address, phone number, Web site URL and e-mail address (if you have one).
8. Send a self-addressed stamped envelope (SASE) if you want your tape or CD back. There are two schools of thought about this. On the pro SASE side, if you dont want to lose all those tapes/CDs, you cant expect to get them back without it. Theres another school of thought, though, that if you say you want it back, youre assuming they wont like it. Theres no guarantee that youll get them back even if you do send a SASE, in which case youre gambling even more money, and worse could happen than your tape or CD sitting around a producers office.
9. Your name, address and phone number should be on the tape or CD, box, and on every lyric sheet. It seems like such a common sense request. In fact it would be embarrassing to even suggest that you might forget to do it if I didnt see it happen constantly. The problem on this end is that, between listening sessions at the office, the car, and home, its so easy to separate the tape from the box or lyric sheet. Once theyve gone to the trouble to find your hit song, not finding you is a fate they dont deserve.
10. Be sure you have adequate postage. Also, dont send your tape in an ordinary stationery envelope. Its risky because rough postal handling could force the edge of the tape box through the envelope. Use a special envelope with an insulated lining. Some people also prefer the soft "bubble" tape box because it doesnt have sharp edges and its lighter to mail. CDs have an obvious advantage in this respect as there are very lightweight sleeves available for them. Having said that, jewel boxes are preferred because , hopefully, they can stack it on a shelf and read the label on the edge if they decide to keep it.
The main thing to remember is to make your demo submission as easy as possible to deal with.
USING THE INTERNET: YOUR DEMO AS AUDIO FILE
An increasingly popular strategy is sending your demo as an audio file. Its rare these days that a record company, producer or manager doesnt have a high-speed Internet access line. Obviously, many of the above suggestions dont apply to sound files.
Giant Records A&R Executive, Craig Coburn says (footnote: Music Connection Magazine Vol. XXV #1 01/01/01): "In the future, I would love to see people soliciting the record labels Ð whether its artists, managers or lawyers Ð using the internet. Id like them to send me a letter asking me to check out their web site rather than sending me the music.
Were not getting that many electronic submissions yet and Id like to. When Im talking to people, I encourage them to send MP3s The Quality of MP3 is not exactly up to the quality of a CD, but its absolutely close enough for an A&R person to hear the music and to know if its something that excites us or not."
The most popular formats are MP3 and RealAudio. The fidelity is not quite CD quality but still adequate to show them what you do. There are a couple different procedures for this:
Send an E-mail with the audio file attached. Follow the suggestions listed above for cover letter (Include phone number(s). Also include your Web site address so they can click it and go directly to it. When they get to your site, theyll hopefully find additional bio material, photos and lyrics.
Just send them an e-mail intriguing enough to get them to go to your site and hear your music there.
Indie marketing guru Tim Sweeney suggests that because of the limited amount of time someone may want to spend at any site and the degree of difficulty their online access speeds may present, its important to help them decide quickly which of your songs may be of most interest to them. You can help by providing a short description like this one provided on the site of Franklin Spicer and Valerie Fords Pegasus Project, a soft jazz, world music group.
"The first song Franklin ever heard from Val was a reggae tune she had recorded called One People. He really liked the positive message and the infectious chorus. Franklin talked her into doing a rewrite and making it a Pegasus Project tune. They wanted to share a positive message of how we all are part of one global family. This song was shaped from a number of African musical influences, including the Tuku style. The huge chorus backup vocals were done in two days of recording using seven different singers."
Note that the description includes information on the style, what its about, why it was written and how it was recorded. Their site also includes lyrics to all the songs.
Your demo will introduce you to the eyes and ears of many music industry professionals. Take this introduction very seriously. It's your job interview. It should look good, have something important to say, and say it well, There are a lot of other applicants for the job. The pros are looking for the best. Be it!
Reprinted with permission
from John Brahenys new revised edition of The
Craft and Business of Songwriting ©2002
(Writers Digest Books). For info on ordering the book or John's
consulting and critiquing services, go to his site at www.johnbraheny.com.
E-mail him at firstname.lastname@example.org
(The original version of this article first appeared in the 1997 Songwriters Market, Writer's Digest Books and in the 3/98 issue of the NAS Songwriters Musepaper. All information has been updated 5/27/98.)